Haiku-Slammed

[Dr. Doog]

<a href='http://ozyandmillie.org/2005/om20050124.html' target='_blank'>Haiku-Slammed</a><br><br>Millie has a new look. or atleast, i've never noticed that face.

[GhostWay]

I believe that look is generally on Ozy's face accompanied by "Wait, what?"<br><br>Also, that's not technically a haiku, as it does not convey an emotion or aspect of nature. But it's still humourous.

[NHJ BV]

Fits well in with Zen and finding-your-own navel <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://definecynical.mancubus.net/forum ... /smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->

[Ankaris]

Bwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahahahaha!<br><br>Ha.<br><br><!--emo&:)--><img src='http://definecynical.mancubus.net/forum ... /smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--><br><br>Good strip.

[Richard K Niner]

Heh.... Classic <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://definecynical.mancubus.net/forum ... iggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->

[Henohenomoheji]

<!--QuoteBegin-GhostWay+Jan 24 2005, 06:45 PM--> <table border='0' align='center' width='95%' ><tr><td class='quotetop'><b>Quote:</b> (GhostWay @ Jan 24 2005, 06:45 PM)</td></tr><tr><td class='quotebody'> Also, that's not technically a haiku, as it does not convey an emotion or aspect of nature.  But it's still humourous. <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table> <!--QuoteEEnd--><br>Yeah, that's why the person who makes the titles for these comics put "senryu" instaid of "haiku". But Millie doesn't know the difference.<br><br>Edit: and neither do the majority of the American public. I would think. Sometimes it's hard to tell the difference.<br><br><!--QuoteBegin--> <table border='0' align='center' width='95%' ><tr><td class='quotetop'><b>Quote:</b> </td></tr><tr><td class='quotebody'> Millie has a new look. or atleast, i've never noticed that face.<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table> <!--QuoteEEnd--><br><br>Actually, I think it's just that she doesn't have any over-the-top-yet-extremely-adorable expressions on her face that she usually does. <br><br>...Or maybe I'm just asleep. But I LOVE THIS STRIP!<br><br>That third panel was neccesary and I see why.

[Holyman83]

OOOhhhh a new way of confusing my floormate!<br><br>Great strip

[Muninn]

This comic brought mirth<br>To a cold and dismal day<br>I thank the artist

[dragonranpu]

I love it. Go Ozy!! <!--emo&:lol:--><img src='http://definecynical.mancubus.net/forum ... /laugh.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='laugh.gif' /><!--endemo-->

[Miles E Traysandor]

Ozy's SMILING!!! Instant Classic! <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://definecynical.mancubus.net/forum ... iggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->

[Amaroq]

When I looked at it, it said Haiku Slam. But, just now when I looked again, seconds later, it now sais Senryu-Slammed.<br><br>Indeed, I love Millie's face in the 3rd panel.<br><br>One more thing, Go Jacob! That Haiku summs up my feelings also.

[Phoenix]

Great strip. Doesn't that lock of hair over Millie's left eye give her a permanently bemused look? <!--emo&B)--><img src='http://definecynical.mancubus.net/forum ... s/cool.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='cool.gif' /><!--endemo-->

[Ozymandias]

SENRYU<br><br>A senryu is a three line Japanese poem structurally similar to haiku. It is unrhymed and the subject is based human nature. It is usually satirical or ironic.<br># line 1 - 5 syllables<br># line 2 - 7 syllables<br># line 3 - 5 syllables<br><br>HAIKU<br><br>A haiku is an unrhymed 17 syllable poem of Japanese origin. It usually has a seasonal reference.The structure is:<br><br>line 1 - 5 syllables<br>line 2 - 7 syllables<br>line 3 - 5 syllables <br><br>Well, I learned something new today <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://definecynical.mancubus.net/forum ... /smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--><br><br>Nice strip, DCS!

[Ruedii-X]

<!--QuoteBegin-DoppledangeR DooG+Jan 24 2005, 03:14 AM--> <table border='0' align='center' width='95%' ><tr><td class='quotetop'><b>Quote:</b> (DoppledangeR DooG @ Jan 24 2005, 03:14 AM)</td></tr><tr><td class='quotebody'> <a href='http://ozyandmillie.org/2005/om20050124.html' target='_blank'>Haiku-Slammed</a><br><br>Millie has a new look. or atleast, i've never noticed that face. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table> <!--QuoteEEnd--><br> I just hope DC Simpson isn't bashing my poetry!! If he is, he's one of the many not seeing the forest for the trees!<br><br><br><a href='http://ruedii-x.deviantart.com' target='_blank'>http://ruedii-x.deviantart.com</a><br><br>Don't worry David, I don't intend to take it up a primary job. *l*<br>

[Henohenomoheji]

...Y'know, now that you mention it... they do look kinda different. Smaller... Younger... Almost like chibi characters... Except not quite.<br><br>I really hope Mr. Simpson makes a three-or-four strip story out of this... sorta like the introduction to Stephanie... you know, there was a somewhere-around four strips detailing how Millie was trying to paint Ozy's hand red with the joke, but kept messing up...<br><br>...but yeah, I can see how it would be difficult to launch this into a three-four strip story.<br><br>...PS: I think they're getting a bit fatter?<br><br>...There's a lot of changes, but I can't put my finger on them...