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Postby Aahe » Wed Jul 30, 2008 5:00 pm

Thank you Tom Flapwell, Tarukai, and Chris. I love those picture responses you do :grin: . Oh, I see that I've been spelling her name wrong...Sorry. What age is Kris?

Please help me fix these pictures, I can handle the constructive criticism.
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Postby Chris » Wed Jul 30, 2008 5:39 pm

She's 16 (strange ain't it? :-P ). Also, I honestly can't give any critism on it since it's adorable and you actually drew kris really well. So:

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Bah, screw the weird looking thumb :-P

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Postby Tarukai » Fri Aug 01, 2008 3:38 am

Thank you Tom Flapwell, Tarukai, and Chris. I love those picture responses you do :grin: . Oh, I see that I've been spelling her name wrong...Sorry. What age is Kris?

Please help me fix these pictures, I can handle the constructive criticism.
Not a problem! Also, I'd need to look again and find them (and believe me, I would), but I need to draw myself D=
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Postby A dude named Vince » Wed Aug 06, 2008 5:26 pm

Bored in Garry's mod again. Yes, I didn't think up the whole Lucario-hugs thing myself. But originality is for people with actual talent. :wink:
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Postby Ibun » Wed Aug 06, 2008 5:37 pm

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Postby Fritz » Thu Aug 07, 2008 3:24 am

Sorry, naps instead ):

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Postby Arloest » Thu Aug 07, 2008 4:29 am

This forum reminds me of Smosh's forum more day after day.
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Postby A dude named Vince » Sun Sep 07, 2008 6:04 pm

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Postby datherman » Sun Sep 07, 2008 6:13 pm

Not bad! My only criticisms:

1. The edges are a bit rough and visibly jagged.
2. In the whitest parts of it, it's hard to see the text underneath my icons.

It's still a neat concept, and I like it.
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Postby A dude named Vince » Sun Sep 07, 2008 6:24 pm

Not bad! My only criticisms:

1. The edges are a bit rough and visibly jagged.
2. In the whitest parts of it, it's hard to see the text underneath my icons.

It's still a neat concept, and I like it.
Yeah, I noticed the messy edges. I should try and fix that.... Not sure what to do about the text difficulties. I can try redoing it with a darker background and adding a blur to see if that helps the messy edges.
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Postby A dude named Vince » Sun Sep 07, 2008 6:41 pm

Sorry for the double post, but I redid the picture. Any better? Constructive criticism appreciated.
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Postby datherman » Sun Sep 07, 2008 11:01 pm

Much better this time, good job.
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Postby A dude named Vince » Sun Sep 07, 2008 11:13 pm

Thanks! =)
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