"Dogs Don't Have Souls, Do They?"
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The name of a poem I first read in an Ann Landers column back in 1998 (I still have that article), and was reading through it again, and it just brings a tear to my eye every time I read it. It's by Chuck Wells.
http://www.petloss.com/poems/maingrp/dogsdont.htm
Just thought I'd share it.
http://www.petloss.com/poems/maingrp/dogsdont.htm
Just thought I'd share it.
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The title reminds me of an exchange Bill Cosby reported in his Kids Say the Darndest Things! book:
"Well, at least you know your dog's in heaven now."
"Why does God want a dead dog?"
"Well, at least you know your dog's in heaven now."
"Why does God want a dead dog?"
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this is a very meaningful poem, and it's very nice.
Thanks Ty. I'll have to remember this at various times throughout my life now, as I'm sure it will help.
Thanks Ty. I'll have to remember this at various times throughout my life now, as I'm sure it will help.
[00:34:00] <Dermy> I do love to manipulate the standard rules of language for opportunistic effect
[00:34:06] <Dermy> Like a grammar hyena, I am
[00:34:16] <Dermy> Munching on the tasty entrails of tradition
[22:26:20] <MuffinSticks> I'm a chocolate muffin with white ears and a striped black and red tail
[22:26:35] <MuffinSticks> And exactly 6 chips
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[00:34:06] <Dermy> Like a grammar hyena, I am
[00:34:16] <Dermy> Munching on the tasty entrails of tradition
[22:26:20] <MuffinSticks> I'm a chocolate muffin with white ears and a striped black and red tail
[22:26:35] <MuffinSticks> And exactly 6 chips
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That was pretty sweet. I felt largely the same way when my family had to put down our golden retriever Lacy. Geez, that was 10 years ago now.
Who sleeps shall awake, greeting the shadows from the sun
Who sleeps shall awake, looking through the window of our lives
Waiting for the moment to arrive...
Show us the silence in the rise,
So that we may someday understand...
Who sleeps shall awake, looking through the window of our lives
Waiting for the moment to arrive...
Show us the silence in the rise,
So that we may someday understand...
I agree. It's mediocre prose turned into poor (and as you put it, floppy) poetry by means of line-breaks.I'm not sure about it. It's too...soppy. Also, structure's too loose. It's a floppy poem. I don't like floppy poetry.
(Sorry to impinge upon the territory of the English teacher)
If you do not repent, I will come to you and remove your lampstand from its place. (Revelation 2:5, NIV)
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I'll show you grumpy.You're not an English teacher. And you're funny when you're grumpy.If I had said that, people would have gotten all pissy at me for sure.I'm not sure about it. It's too...soppy. Also, structure's too loose. It's a floppy poem. I don't like floppy poetry.

Killin' the first born of lyrical Yul Brynners.
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If you do not repent, I will come to you and remove your lampstand from its place. (Revelation 2:5, NIV)
Josh Woodward, Ohio Singer/Songwriter, offers his songs for free. Give him a listen.
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Meh. I wasn't really doting too much on the peom's originality or its structure. For poems like these I feel the message is the only thing that matters.I agree. It's mediocre prose turned into poor (and as you put it, floppy) poetry by means of line-breaks.I'm not sure about it. It's too...soppy. Also, structure's too loose. It's a floppy poem. I don't like floppy poetry.
(Sorry to impinge upon the territory of the English teacher)
Who sleeps shall awake, greeting the shadows from the sun
Who sleeps shall awake, looking through the window of our lives
Waiting for the moment to arrive...
Show us the silence in the rise,
So that we may someday understand...
Who sleeps shall awake, looking through the window of our lives
Waiting for the moment to arrive...
Show us the silence in the rise,
So that we may someday understand...
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