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Tuesday, June 16, 1998: Serenity

Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 2:07 am
by NonsenseWords
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I... really like this. I think it would have been perfect if it had been completely silent.

Re: Tuesday, June 16, 1998: Serenity

Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 2:13 am
by Burning Sheep Productions
I think it would have been perfect if it had been completely silent.
I agree.

Re: Tuesday, June 16, 1998: Serenity

Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 2:34 am
by Happy Rutabegas year
definitely better. really cute now.

Re: Tuesday, June 16, 1998: Serenity

Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 6:14 am
by osprey
The silent one is definitely better. Though they are both great and cute.

Re: Tuesday, June 16, 1998: Serenity

Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 11:19 am
by Tom_Radigan
Actually, I thought the word balloon was necessary so people would understand what was happening. This strip is very cute either way. :smile:

Re: Tuesday, June 16, 1998: Serenity

Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 3:37 pm
by nickspoon
The strip is so much better without the bubble. It doesn't really need a joke. Then again, as a completely standalone strip, it wouldn't make much sense without the bubble. So I suppose either way is good.

Re: Tuesday, June 16, 1998: Serenity

Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 4:06 pm
by Cactus Jack
Its too vague without the bubble.

Re: Tuesday, June 16, 1998: Serenity

Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 11:43 pm
by NonsenseWords
Hm... that is true. I suppose for syndication it would be better to have the bubble, but the 'silent' version is a much sweeter image.

Re: Tuesday, June 16, 1998: Serenity

Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 6:15 am
by Burning Sheep Productions
Given that we know Ozy I think less is more here.

Re: Tuesday, June 16, 1998: Serenity

Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 7:40 am
by datherman
The speech bubble would probably be best as a caption, really. Keeps the image itself clean while still providing an explanation if needed.

Re: Tuesday, June 16, 1998: Serenity

Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 4:12 am
by Bocaj Claw
Well, we know Ozy now. This was one of the first year or so of comics. So for new readers character establishment would still be ongoing.

Re: Tuesday, June 16, 1998: Serenity

Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 2:41 am
by Doc Sigma
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It's always the quiet ones you've gotta look out for...

Re: Tuesday, June 16, 1998: Serenity

Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 10:59 am
by Burning Sheep Productions
Such calm confidence and power makes me swoon.

Re: Tuesday, June 16, 1998: Serenity

Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 11:46 pm
by Bocaj Claw
Ah-ha! I knew that the strawman principal had a point what with the profiling of the smart, quiet, pantsless kid!