The Zephyros

[GhostWay]

I haven't done much work on this lately, but chapter 3 is now done. I'm not entirely happy with it, but it's as good as it's going to get at the moment. Mainly providing some background history.<br><br><a href='http://www.abort-retry-ignore.net/lit/Z ... yros03.rtf' target='_blank'>Chapter 3 - Keeping TABs</a><br><br>Very bad pun for the chapter title. But it will make sense after you read it.

[Trance]

Nicely done. It's hard to think up a viable alien race's name, ain't it? <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://definecynical.mancubus.net/forum ... iggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo--> At least, one that hasn't already been taken by Star Trek.

[GhostWay]

Uhh... when did I say anything about extraterrestrials in this story? I'm trying to stay away from that, as that is all too common in sci-fi.

[Zaaphod]

It's a good story. More, more! <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://definecynical.mancubus.net/forum ... /smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--><br>