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Cross over comic.

Posted: Sun Dec 21, 2008 5:15 am
by Segovia
Just had to do it. It was just a matter of time.

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To be honest, I don't like the punchline. Wish I could have thought of something better but I was sleepy and tired.

Posted: Sun Dec 21, 2008 5:16 am
by Segovia
I never learned how to draw characters in motion. Another first time attempt.

Posted: Sun Dec 21, 2008 6:16 am
by Dr. Sticks
I don't understand it (the punch line). I know a lot of words, but I've never heard of the word dialectible (and a google search asks if I meant dialectical, which still doesn't make the punchline make sense). I know you don't like it either, but you should consider that your audience will probably not know what a dialectible note is.

Posted: Sun Dec 21, 2008 6:29 am
by Segovia
It is also known as analytical notes. These notes are used in the study of novels. What you do is read a book and you take quotes that you've read and analyze them with your own perspective. Thus this is what Reggie is doing when he sees O&M playing.

Posted: Sun Dec 21, 2008 6:42 am
by Dr. Sticks
ah. You should use analytical in place of dialectible, because neither wiktionary nor a google search "define: dialectible" yields any return. I think your teacher made it up. Also, people can recognize the word analytical based on its root analyze. Dialectible just looks like it's something to do with dialect.

Posted: Sun Dec 21, 2008 4:23 pm
by Fritz
I agree with sticks.

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Posted: Sun Dec 21, 2008 4:54 pm
by Segovia
I don't like the way I drew O&M. Told you I can't.

Posted: Sun Dec 21, 2008 5:59 pm
by Dr. Sticks
no one said anything about taht

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 3:34 am
by Segovia
Any comments about the writing or the art?

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 3:48 am
by Dr. Sticks
ah. You should use analytical in place of dialectible, because neither wiktionary nor a google search "define: dialectible" yields any return. I think your teacher made it up. Also, people can recognize the word analytical based on its root analyze. Dialectible just looks like it's something to do with dialect.
the joke isn't really took funny, you should consider either removing the joke aspect all together, or not doing something that other people will disagree with. Most people would be upset if you asked them that question. you sound like a teacher :P

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 3:50 am
by Segovia
I admit it. I don't really care about the joke. I just really wanted to draw Minerva Bros. and O&M together.