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Alright, I bite....

Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 8:12 pm
by Alestance
Image

What did I do wrong?

Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 8:27 pm
by Baconsticks
Nothing's really wrong. Unless you count the pixelation.

Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 9:33 pm
by Sage
the white shine thing on his hat goes vertically, not diagonal. The blue band on his hat could be a little smaller... it all looks good though =p

and yes, it looks like you zoomed in quite a bit then took a picture using Print Screen? =O

Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 11:47 pm
by datherman
The slope of his belly is a bit too straight, otherwise it looks very nice.

Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 12:35 am
by Ibun
You drew Ozy.

Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 12:39 am
by Alestance
I can't actually do a thing about the pixelation. Thats the program's fault. The image itself is at 1:1, or maybe not.

All of the things mentioned, besides the fact that I drew him, can be easily fixed though, and I'll follow up later.

I have a bit of a problem with the tail, though, it doesn't look right to me.

Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 1:26 am
by datherman
I have a bit of a problem with the tail, though, it doesn't look right to me.
Looks to be a bit too narrow at the base, at least when compared to this forum's logo.

Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 2:27 am
by Fritz
You drew Ozy.

Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 2:30 am
by Baconsticks
You drew Ozy.

Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 3:23 am
by Tarukai
This is well done, and the tail is a bit flat at the expanding area, but that's the only thing I noticed.

Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 4:00 am
by Arloest
I really like this style, I must say.

Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 4:34 am
by Alestance
Some minor tweaks and NOW its at 1:1.

Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 4:43 am
by Ibun
I really like this style, I must say.
Image ?

Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 4:55 am
by Alestance
Image

Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 12:26 pm
by GeorgiaCoyote
Not bad. Then again I'm not much of a critic when it comes to artwork as I've said multiple times, ya'll do better than I ever could.