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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2004 2:31 pm
by Foxchild
This is a comic i drew for another LJ user called mandoandy. the two chars don't yet have names, but they are brothers.
Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2004 3:20 pm
by Muninn
Llewellyn picture.<br>Upside down signature.<br>Millie and Avery.<br>Nice touches.<br><br>Nice art, you're probably the best here, plus the chair is very similar to mine. Now the constructive criticism; the cupboards are crooked, a ruler would help. The third panel split would be better as just a straight line or a zig zag all the way. Seperate panels, it looks much better that way. You mispelled <i>supplies</i>.
Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2004 3:25 pm
by Foxchild
woohoo mispellings! and yes, normally i do separate the panels, and use a ruler. take a look at the redone one of mine involving the 5 litres or gallons, depending upon version, of cherry kool-aid. critisisms taken with gratitude. thanks.
Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2004 3:31 pm
by Dr. Dos
Very nice indeed.
Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2004 6:17 pm
by Tavis
hehe Nice.. oh, and you also misspelled <i>generous</i>. And I think artist signatures look nicer when they're done by hand.. it gives it the personal touch a font lacks.<br><br>All in all, a great comic with lots of potental.
Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2004 6:21 pm
by Foxchild
yeah, but 2 things. 1) i forgot the signiture by hand, and 2) my handwriting sucked on it anyway, hence the computer font. I prefere by hand, but this time i was too sloppy to let it pass. An i'm going to go in and clear up the misspellings in a little bit, once i'm home. thanks for pointing those out.
Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2004 10:18 pm
by norsenerd
Good work.<br><br>*aplouds*
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2004 1:26 am
by penguinita
i'll disagree w/ javcob on this one-- i like the way the 3rd pannel is split
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2004 2:22 am
by Arloest
Good job! Very professional, with the exception of a couple mispellings here and there, but we all make 'em.
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2004 3:03 am
by Zaaphod
Good stuff. <!--emo&:)--><img src='
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Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2004 4:14 am
by norsenerd
Peopel who don't spell perficly are inhearntly stupid.
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2004 5:22 am
by Sabre
The pope likes, The pope likes.
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2004 5:28 am
by Zylo
Coffee. Pixy-stix. All the makings of a great strip.<br><br>Me likes a lot.
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2004 12:48 pm
by Burning Sheep Productions
My critisism, WHAT HAPPENED TO THE FANGS!!?<br>Fangless dogs; what is the world comming to?
Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2004 4:30 pm
by Muninn
<i>Penguinita wrote<br>i'll disagree w/ javcob on this one</i><br><br>It's Tavis' name you're supposed to spell wrong.
