I finally got the storyboard back a week or two ago, so I put together the entire project here. Sorry if you don't use Microsoft Word.
Short Story - the main attraction, 7 pages
Final draft, rough draft.
Final draft has some moderate changes from the rough draft I originally posted here. I've also uploaded the final draft in TXT format here if you don't want to open up Word to read it. Sorry, no forced word wrapping.
Screenplay - the above story turned into dialog format, as if it was an actual movie. Here I turned it into Millie looking back on the situation, so anytime you see "(V.O)" it means that it's Millie doing a voice-over, narrating the events that occurred. 9 pages.
Final draft
Storyboard - 12 scenes from our "movie" drawn out and colored, with scene information on each one. Mostly traced from official O&M strips we cropped and printed out. House Rules was helpful in getting color references.
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I gave Greg the image for scene 11 to use as a REFERENCE so he could modify it into a hugging scene. Apparently he didn't get the memo.
Business letter - required for assignment, fake letter to some production company.
Final draft
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Original post:
Due to an English assignment to write a short story, I ended up writing an Ozy and Millie fan-fiction of sorts. However, there are a few things to keep in mind:
1. The majority of this was written at 2-4 AM last night. As such, the writing quality isn't the greatest.
2. The intended readerbase has no knowledge of what Ozy and Millie is, hence the lengthy (and sometimes inaccurate) descriptions.
3. This is the first rough draft of the story, and so I haven't really looked through it to find any errors or places to make revisions. This might come later if my group chooses to use my story for our project.
4. The short story needed to have all the traditional plot elements, which is why the plot seems rather thin. I think my intro is decent, but I couldn't think of a good enough conflict to make it all that great. Also, the ending is a complete cop-out, hehe.
5. Quotes in the middle are from the Big Book of Semi-Coherent Wisdom (around June of 2000).
Constructive criticism would be nice, but I fully understand that huge walls of text are daunting for most people.
With that said, enjoy.
--rough draft here--
