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Well since I got a request for art from my introduction, here's a pic I recently drew of Milly. Hope ya'll enjoy

Oh my, heh, I love it. That's a wonderfully cute interpretation of the character. Awesome body language, though I think she's looking just a little *too* innocent, hehe.

Do you have a website or anything? I'd love to see more of your art.

I don't have a personal website no, I will whenever I start actually "doing" something with art. I do have a two art upload sites but that's about it. And yeah, She has that "I didn't do anything" look to her but you know she was up to some kinda mischif. Either that or she was just being cute. I should work on it a little and maybe fix the eyes somewhat. I dunno.

I really like your style, CF, but I'm not sure it suits Millie. It just seems too suggestive for a 10-year-old. I'd love to see more though.

Thats one sexy Millie you made Caffeine person!

Something is wrong with the eyes, she looks too buff, she's not in her signature overalls, and the head is flat.

I would never be able to tell that is supposed to be Millie.

On the bright side: the body is well done, the feetpaws are good, the muzzle's well shaped, and I like the ears. Not to mention she's sexy whoever it is, but it's just not Millie.

Nice drawing, overall, but here are my issues:

1. She's a bit sexy... for someone who isn't even a teen yet
2. Too innocent, Millie is not that innocent
3. Muscles! I've never seen millie with that many muscles (but now I have to see you draw Ozy with muscles )

I do like how you drew the face and head, though.

The ears remind me of Tabris's style.

That is a very interesting interpretation of Millie, caffeinefox. You have a very nice way of designing a character. However, I would agree with some of the criticism that without you actually saying that's suppose to be Millie, there's not enough there to significantly recognize her as such.

The ears remind me of Tabris's style.

I have a style? Awesome!

[quote="Priest_Revan"]1. She's a bit sexy... for someone who isn't even a teen yet
2. Too innocent, Millie is not that innocent/quote]

Heh, too sexy and too innocent? That's unpossible!

Myself, I love how it isn't an exact clone of her - it's great to see something new.

Millie with Muscles: a movie following the success of Santa with Muscles.

Again, I must also agree with most of the people here.
I wouldn't recognize her as Millie, nor does she seem in character, but it is a good picture.

she's not in her signature overalls.

1] she is in her traditional overalls but is wearing a shirt over them.

I really like your style, CF, but I'm not sure it suits Millie. It just seems too suggestive for a 10-year-old. I'd love to see more though.

Thats one sexy Millie you made Caffeine person!

2] I never intended for this image to be sugjestive or "sexy" in any way and will indefinately edit the pose to correct such misdirection. my apologies.

she looks too buff.

3] I do admit I have trouble drawing the female form or a non adult form. In which most of my drawings will have this buff format due to how I draw my male fox character Duncan Sparks. This is something I will need to work on.

4] And on a final note, I wasn't attempting to draw Mr. Simpson's characters in his style. I find it quite hard to copy anothers style and I intended to draw the character in my own personal style instead. Although I will have to work on making at least recognizable, as well as really observe Milly's persona and character to get a idea of how to project her and Ozzy.

All in all I apretiate the feedback and to those who feel my art style is good and I thank you

One thing you might want to start with is including the black of her ears, hands, feet, and tail. That would help some. Also, it's really not clear that she's in her overalls under that shirt like you say. Perhaps giving the shorts part a more denim look (which admittedly would be easier in color. I'd rework the shirt some too, it looks a bit wonky between sides.

Hope that helps. I can be less than precise when giving art critics sometimes.

Something is wrong with the eyes, she looks too buff, she's not in her signature overalls, and the head is flat.

I would never be able to tell that is supposed to be Millie.

On the bright side: the body is well done, the feetpaws are good, the muzzle's well shaped, and I like the ears. Not to mention she's sexy whoever it is, but it's just not Millie.

I agree with everything said here.