Alter Aaron
Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 3:58 am
Due to that lovely Debug mode, I can't Copy and paste the story into the forum. However, I can Upload the file for you all to read it. It's basically a revision of the old one with more characters, longer plots, and all around betterness.
http://www.savefile.com/files.php?fid=5908508
Click the link and opene the file to read chapters 1-5, then post any thoughts you have!
http://www.savefile.com/files.php?fid=5908508
Click the link and opene the file to read chapters 1-5, then post any thoughts you have!