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Cool characters

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 1:30 am
by Niko123000
I've made some characters for use in another forum and this is what I have:

Jack "Border Walker" McCloskey (Also is my avatar)

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Renae The Wolf

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More will come as I make them. What you guys think?

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 2:16 am
by Miles E Traysandor
The first one is pretty good, I'm not so sure about the second, but great artwork overall :wag:

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 2:29 am
by DesertFoxCat
The first one is pretty good, I'm not so sure about the second, but great artwork overall :wag:
I agree totally

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 3:09 am
by Zaaphod
Nice stuff Niko. :D

I like the first one the best.

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 4:29 am
by Tum0spoo
Like I said in the avatar forum.
PWNZORS

The first one anyway. Very nice.
The second one looks weird because of the eyes... Is one missing or what?

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 4:49 am
by Niko123000
The base Image I [stole][ it form had only one eye, even though there should be two, It was the angle. Mine just improves on it by making it look like her hair covers the other eye.

also couyld youi guys try telling mew why the second one isn't as good as the first, so I can improve on it?

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 5:02 am
by Tum0spoo
Mostly it's the coloring. Too much white space between the color and the outline.

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 5:05 am
by Niko123000
Well I'll try to edit, but She was hrd to do as I had to leave the detail lines.

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 5:56 am
by Niko123000
Duoble post for Edits:

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Jack Slightly Edited

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Jack Inverted

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Jack with Lightning

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Renae edited

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Renae inverted

If you guys want I can post the Descriptions for these guys too.

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 6:31 am
by Bocaj Claw
Oh my. That fox fellow seems to have a bad case of red-eye or as its known in "the business," evil eye.

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 6:51 am
by Tum0spoo
Oh I couldn't tell her nose was up. The darker background makes it easier to see. Very nice.

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 9:56 am
by Burning Sheep Productions
Nice drawings but the colouring could be improved by altering your method.
http://www.glasswings.com.au/comics/hou ... ethods.htm

Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 1:52 pm
by Niko123000
Nice drawings but the colouring could be improved by altering your method.
http://www.glasswings.com.au/comics/hou ... ethods.htm
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Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 5:21 pm
by Bringerofpie
Nice drawings but the colouring could be improved by altering your method.
http://www.glasswings.com.au/comics/hou ... ethods.htm
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Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 6:57 pm
by The MAZZTer
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