Segovia's Art Work (w/ General Discussion ) Thread

[Segovia]

Krystal further improved.

[Trance]

I don't get it. What improved?

[Segovia]

I moved the tail a little to the right, I gave her butt a little more curvature, I gave her back more body, I moved her right arm a little further out so it won't look she's sticking her chest a whole lot and I gave her a little grin.

[Æron]

That's much better, actually. Good work.

I don't get it. What improved?

I highlighted the biggest improvement, which actually helps a lot, if you look close enough.

[Dr. Sticks]

you should draw the pants overlapping the tail entirely, it still looks like the tail is coming out at the wrong angle. (make the tail be behind her.)

[Mekkah]

you still need to work on defining the body and it's curves

[Segovia]

thank you aeron!

[Trance]

you still need to work on defining the body and it's curves

You still need to work on defining the apostrophe and its correct usage.

[Dr. Sticks]

he was saying "the body and it has curves"

[Trance]

That would be "the body and it is curves".

[Dr. Sticks]

that's debatable.

[Trance]

Not really, if you paid attention in English class.

[MuffinSticks]

Trance, stop please.

[Mekkah]

you still need to work on defining the body and it's curves

You still need to work on defining the apostrophe and its correct usage.

maybe you should say something important the next time you post

[MuffinSticks]

you still need to work on defining the body and it's curves

You still need to work on defining the apostrophe and its correct usage.

maybe you should say something important the next time you post

Oh, come on. No need for that.