Well, let's fix that, why don't we?Sorry Aahe I can't really see yours.
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Cameron is awesome because:
-Because he has an artistic style that is both complex and minimalist. This is profound!
-He once drew me as a roadrunner. It was an actual honest to god feral roadrunner, but a roadrunner nonetheless!
-He lives in Idaho among the wilderness and stuff and I envy him for that. 3:
-He is probably one of the most personable artists on here.
-I think he's the only one of us on here who drew a fanart that made it as a guest strip on O&M. This is an accomplishment!
Oh I see that now, thank you .Well the Arms look a little too thin, and it looks like the Arms and feet could be a little less angular I think if they were curved a little more it would look better. However it is still better that what I can draw. I don't have time to draw.
Could you explain that angular comment, I'm not sure what you mean ^^;.
I think he's trying to explain something like this:
The front of the feet are rounded, sure enough, but the lines you have on the "top" and "bottom" of the feet are running parallel to each other. If you look at Millie's feet in the "DefineCynical" banner, you'll see what I mean.
Just a few observations of my own:
-Ozy's tail is just a tad bit too small, especially where it joins his body. It looks better if it's a little thicker and bushier. (is that a word)
-More curves overall in the body, especially arms and legs.
-In the second picture, his snout seems to be a little bit too small for the rest of his head.
That's just my overall impressions on how you could make these drawings even better, although I am no artist.. :/ Although I will say this, for a first-time fanart, you are doing extraordinarily well. Keep on it for sure!
The front of the feet are rounded, sure enough, but the lines you have on the "top" and "bottom" of the feet are running parallel to each other. If you look at Millie's feet in the "DefineCynical" banner, you'll see what I mean.
Just a few observations of my own:
-Ozy's tail is just a tad bit too small, especially where it joins his body. It looks better if it's a little thicker and bushier. (is that a word)
-More curves overall in the body, especially arms and legs.
-In the second picture, his snout seems to be a little bit too small for the rest of his head.
That's just my overall impressions on how you could make these drawings even better, although I am no artist.. :/ Although I will say this, for a first-time fanart, you are doing extraordinarily well. Keep on it for sure!
Astro> gforce's smiles can cure cancer in kittensgforce422 is awesome because:
-He made the absolute nicest comments about me in the other topic. I didn't respond to them yet, because I suck, but they are greatly appreciated! =D
-I would say he would also be a good runner up as one of the nicest people alive.
-He joined the IRC sometimes. But not enough, I say! Chat moar =D
-He is evidently only 18 year old but he could easily pass for 25. =D
-He is a drummer like *I* am and this in itself is cool.
Astro> the happiness radiating from your person is enough to solve tensor calculus
<mib_4do271>everything you touch explodes in pillows of happiness
I guess they should be a bit more curved. Oh! I see that, I'll change that. I think it is a word, and an accurate one for the situation. So the arms don't have joints they just bend right? I'll go and try to make the snout bigger. Thank youI think he's trying to explain something like this:
The front of the feet are rounded, sure enough, but the lines you have on the "top" and "bottom" of the feet are running parallel to each other. If you look at Millie's feet in the "DefineCynical" banner, you'll see what I mean.
Just a few observations of my own:
-Ozy's tail is just a tad bit too small, especially where it joins his body. It looks better if it's a little thicker and bushier. (is that a word)
-More curves overall in the body, especially arms and legs.
-In the second picture, his snout seems to be a little bit too small for the rest of his head.
That's just my overall impressions on how you could make these drawings even better, although I am no artist.. :/ Although I will say this, for a first-time fanart, you are doing extraordinarily well. Keep on it for sure!
, you've helped me see some flaws.
Feh, when it comes to LONG posts...
I now realise just how much I'm missing in some of these longer threads... And thank goodness for looking back and finding this one. Ozy just keeps getting cuter with each feminine makeover. My one concern is how the makeup can work on his face, unless he's just blushing. Would love to see this one in colour. Wonderful work!Oooh, suits you SIR!
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