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Wednesday, 16 April 2008: Ozy's world
Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 10:53 pm
by Extreme-Speed
http://ozyandmillie.org/d/20080416.html
I'm simply wondering why Ozy has mud on the
top of his tail...
Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 11:07 pm
by Svix
All nice colours converge to brown when mixed, it's an evil fact of life.
Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 11:16 pm
by osprey
What can brown do for you?
Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 11:18 pm
by Baconsticks
FOOD COLORING
Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 11:35 pm
by Mista_B
REVENGE! It's always revenge, unless it's ooh shiny.
Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 12:44 am
by gforce422
Moar funnies.
Re: Wednesday, 16 April 2008: Ozy's world
Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 12:45 am
by Richard K Niner
I'm simply wondering why Ozy has mud on the top of his tail...
Because he was sitting on it
Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 1:02 am
by datherman
Honestly I think I'd be more scared of multi-colored "fish eggs" than all-brown ones.
Also I've forgotten what she's trying to get revenge on. =/
Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 11:57 am
by Steve the Pocket
I wish my characters had Millie's attention span. Then I wouldn't end up getting stuck in arcs I have no clue how to wrap up.
Anyway I love that technique of writing self-interrupting speech where there's no dash or anything, just goes right into it. Definitely a technique worth imitating if the occasion ever arises.
Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 3:31 pm
by Tom Flapwell
Anyway I love that technique of writing self-interrupting speech where there's no dash or anything, just goes right into it.
I usually like it, but this time, it caused me a moment of confusion somehow. Maybe it works better when the sudden shouted word is something like "HEY!" or "NO!"
Another practice I usually like is overlapping word bubbles to signify interruptions and missed words.
Re: Wednesday, 16 April 2008: Ozy's world
Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 4:57 pm
by Sage
I'm simply wondering why Ozy has mud on the top of his tail...
Because he was sitting on it
More like, lying down on top of it... on his back
Also... Ozy actually went through with it...
Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 6:27 pm
by GeorgiaCoyote
Saw that coming from a mile away. What I didn't expect though was for Millie to actually remember at the very end what this all was about.
Re: Wednesday, 16 April 2008: Ozy's world
Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 6:28 pm
by Tom Flapwell
Ozy actually went through with it...
To a point. There were some things he says he wouldn't touch.
Ozy's been obedient for less pleasant tasks. Remember his "Shining" moment when Millie wanted him to write all those words?