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Monday, June 18, 2007: Good verses, bad

Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 8:54 pm
by Fritz

Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 9:01 pm
by Llewthepoet
He was a poet and he did know it! :-P

Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 9:25 pm
by NHJ BV
For A Llewellyn
Lasting Popularity
Is Easily Gained

Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 9:50 pm
by Svix
For A Llewellyn
Lasting Popularity
Is Easily Gained
Bringing back the mad Haiku skillz!!!

The rabbit and canid fellow are most intriguing!

Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 10:13 pm
by Sage
I hope nobody expects me to color this

:!:

*cowers*

Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 10:18 pm
by Praadur
Hm, that's interesting...

That breed of canine (whichever it is) seems to be becoming quite ubiquitous with illustrated anthropomorphic period fiction, at least I've seen it around once or twice. Perhaps it's the parallel drawn between the odd moustache/beard combinations they had back then.

Anyway, standing around in public spaces reading completley ludicrous (albeit technically correct?) haiku is worthy. This does nothing to shake my adoration of Llewelyn, instead it does much to cement it.

I'm just wondering what manner of huge, history-changing event this past Llewelyn will find himself involved in.

Oh and don't worry Sage, no one should expect you to do something you wouldn't want to. Of course, you can try if you want to... but for fun this time you could try doing it in the style of Yoshi's Island!

(And now I have this image in my head of Llewelyn standing next to a very curious Millicent, warning flatly; "Touch fuzzy, get dizzy.")

Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 10:26 pm
by Sage
Lulz!

As for the coloring, the reason I don't want to color it is panel 3.

Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 10:31 pm
by gforce422
This comic is pretty funny
Slightly sweet like clover honey
And yes, Praduur, that breed of canine
Brings me many years back in time
When I was a developing poet
But I really didn't know it
So I sold it to a passerby
For a little piece of apple pie
And now, poetless, I can only type
So I will not expect much hype
Over this poem, for, lame as it may be
It is now on the forum, for all to see.
I cannot go on much longer
(Or I will start making up words like, "blunger"
Better stop and get some rest.
Nice job on this one, D.C.S.!



P.S: Sage, don't color panel three
For a major pain it prove to be
Why don't you rest, and take the time
To develop another verse to this rhyme!

Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 12:54 am
by CodeCat
I'm a dreadful poet with a stammer,
So I'll just post this up here like a spammer.
For my life I couldn't rhyme,
Takes me far too much time,
I'm really not a pentameter slammer.

Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 1:04 am
by Sage
I can see the rhyming a-heating
I'm about to administer A BEATING!

Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 1:30 am
by gforce422
Oh noes! Oh noes! Oh noes I say
Please no beatings for today.
Hey guys, lets have some more sweet rhymes,
It's such a good way to pass the time.
(Maybe I'll make it a forum game,
What do you think? Would it be lame?)

Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 1:36 am
by Sage
What do you think? Would it be lame?)
yup

I can't write poems or rhymes to save my life.

Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 1:45 am
by gforce422
Alas! Alas! Our poor old Sage
Stuck like a bird inside a cage
(of lack of poetry, that is)
There are many things you might've missed!
It heals the body, mind, and soul
(though it won't really put food in your bowl)
So there's really not too much to say
Just sign up for poetry class today!

Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 2:21 am
by CameronCN
Alas! Alas! Our poor old Sage
Stuck like a bird inside a cage
(of lack of poetry, that is)
There are many things you might've missed!
It heals the body, mind, and soul
(though it won't really put food on the table)
So there's really not too much to say
Just sign up for poetry class today!
Why don't you change "food on the table" for "food in your bowl" so it will all rhyme?

Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 2:52 am
by gforce422
Alas! Alas! Our poor old Sage
Stuck like a bird inside a cage
(of lack of poetry, that is)
There are many things you might've missed!
It heals the body, mind, and soul
(though it won't really put food on the table)
So there's really not too much to say
Just sign up for poetry class today!
Why don't you change "food on the table" for "food in your bowl" so it will all rhyme?

Alrighty! I'll change it! Bowl it is!
It will be edited, though it won't be missed.
This rhyming I am really enjoying,
Though, let me know if it gets annoying. :lol: