Monday, May 11, 1998: False advertising

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Monday, May 11, 1998: False advertising

Postby NonsenseWords » Thu Jan 14, 2010 5:08 pm

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I really don't like this one. The punchline comes across as forced and talky in its attempt to explain itself, and the first panel is completely pointless. Frankly, I'd rather have had two strips with some bizarre dialogue from the television, and then the punchline be 'We'll return to our Saturday movie, 'Benny the Neurotic Reindeer', after these messages".
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Re: Monday, May 11, 1998:

Postby cougartiger » Thu Jan 14, 2010 8:58 pm

Agree on all points, though I'd use "The Night The Reindeer Died" starring Lee Majors. :)

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Re: Monday, May 11, 1998:

Postby osprey » Fri Jan 15, 2010 4:28 am

I used to know a guy who was big and named Roy. It's kind of funny actually picturing him doing a car ad actually.
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Re: Monday, May 11, 1998: False advertising

Postby klimt » Fri Jan 15, 2010 5:19 am

panel 1 is posed and drawn nicely.
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Re: Monday, May 11, 1998: False advertising

Postby Jakkal » Fri Jan 15, 2010 10:15 am

I know the "loud advert." problem quite good... you're watching a film (normaly stopping at a quiet scene), then a big bang and crap ads are running over the tv... P*ssing me off
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Re: Monday, May 11, 1998: False advertising

Postby Maggot Brain » Tue Jan 19, 2010 12:58 am

"Benny The Neurotic Reindeer" always makes me laugh for some reason.

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Re: Monday, May 11, 1998: False advertising

Postby Cactus Jack » Wed Jan 20, 2010 1:44 am

Millie appears to be watching tv in a white void. Seems like DCS has an idea where to go with this one but never really got there. The punchline isn't really a punchline, just alot of talking.


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