What would improve "Raine Dog"?
Alright, we all agree Raine Dog is an awful webcomic. So... What could be done to improve it? If you had the raw ability, what ONE would you change about it?
I, for one, would alter the writing by a GREAT deal, adding some form of Metrics to know the continuity has changed (aside from it being a different strip).
I, for one, would alter the writing by a GREAT deal, adding some form of Metrics to know the continuity has changed (aside from it being a different strip).
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Re: What would improve "Raine Dog"?
Only one thing? As bad as the writing is I think by telling the story is some sort of order it would at least cut down on confusion and distractions. Even if DCS has some sort of goal by jumping all over the place he could finish an arc before jumping through time so that the reader could have a little understanding of what is going on with the bigger picture.
Re: What would improve "Raine Dog"?
If I changed something about Raine Dog, it would not be Raine Dog anymore.
Re: What would improve "Raine Dog"?
Raine Penguin.
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Re: What would improve "Raine Dog"?
Someone needs to draw a parody strip of Raine Dog.
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<Muninn> Too furry for saneville, too girly for boystown
<Muninn> Too furry for saneville, too girly for boystown
see, how far raine dog got placed in the background? take that you blue bitch
Re: What would improve "Raine Dog"?
I can't see how a single change can fix the comic. Also, I find it nearly depressing to attempt listing ways to fix the comic.
I would just skip to getting Jeff in a fursuit from strip #1.
I would just skip to getting Jeff in a fursuit from strip #1.
Anami and Anami are sitting around Anami says "GRR I AM ANGSTY LET'S EXPRESS ANGST" and so Anami says "ONE OF THE MODS ON DC IS A DICK I POSTED A PICTURE THAT WASN'T REALLY THAT INAPPROPRIATE AND THREE MODS SAW IT AND DID NOTHING THEN A FOURTH ONE SAW IT AND DELETED IT" and Anami says "OMG I HATE MODS >:("
Re: What would improve "Raine Dog"?
I would remove the pretentious overtone that always seems to be present.
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Re: What would improve "Raine Dog"?
I almost said exactly that.I would remove the pretentious overtone that always seems to be present.
If you've done things right, people won't be sure if you've done anything at all.
Re: What would improve "Raine Dog"?
Raine Penguin.
Who sleeps shall awake, greeting the shadows from the sun
Who sleeps shall awake, looking through the window of our lives
Waiting for the moment to arrive...
Show us the silence in the rise,
So that we may someday understand...
Who sleeps shall awake, looking through the window of our lives
Waiting for the moment to arrive...
Show us the silence in the rise,
So that we may someday understand...
Re: What would improve "Raine Dog"?
If at first you don't succeed, then skydiving is not for you.
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Re: What would improve "Raine Dog"?
Damn, I was thinking the same thingI almost said exactly that.I would remove the pretentious overtone that always seems to be present.
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Re: What would improve "Raine Dog"?
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<Muninn> Too furry for saneville, too girly for boystown
<Muninn> Too furry for saneville, too girly for boystown
see, how far raine dog got placed in the background? take that you blue bitch
Re: What would improve "Raine Dog"?
Ha ha, is that an actual strip from Nedroid? I don't remember it.
Also, actual parody strips I've seen, none of them too kind.
Also, actual parody strips I've seen, none of them too kind.
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Re: What would improve "Raine Dog"?
Yeah and I actually meant a DCer needs to make a parody strip. Like Liz perhaps. I don't think she cares enough though.
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<Muninn> Too furry for saneville, too girly for boystown
<Muninn> Too furry for saneville, too girly for boystown
see, how far raine dog got placed in the background? take that you blue bitch
Re: What would improve "Raine Dog"?
what would improve it?... A story arc
from DCS RD FAQ HP:
from DCS RD FAQ HP:
oh yeah... basically: DC: "Well let's see... oh, first I explain the childhood.... no it would be boring... I got it... It will be somewhat be like Pulp Ficton... nah... I just draw some chapters... I can sort them later..."Do you already know how this is going to end?
I have the whole story basically mapped out, yes.
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